Wow, this is a pretty sweet design, hmm advanced critique eh? Alright...The shading is very nice, you got the black fur nicely without diluting the rest of him, as in--he's not a giant black splotch. Shadow Lords tend to be more heavy set than most garou though, his form seems like that more of a Stargazer or Silent Strider. His head fits though as a shadowlord, so there's no need to worry about that. If I could see his hands better I would give some crit. on those too, but they seem fine from here, just remember that they are almost exactly human like, just with sharp killing blades on each finger. Just a White Wolf question though..are his clothes dedicated to him? Cause for the most part when a crinos shift happens they will either: a) disappear into several tatoo's on his body or b) be torn to shreds. I like this though. keep up the nice work. And by the by...are you left handed? The smudging kinda raises a few flags.

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Something Cannot be Feared More than Fear Itself...Especially Spider Demon Gods...

Thomas himself started LARP with three Physical Traits. He's since learned fighting from two Striders (one who's trained under a Kalindo Master), and two Fianna brothers. So, basically, he's gone from having no regular physical ability to being very tone, and fast. He's actually trained in Umbral / Dream Time with his Totem (Grandfather Thunder) and managed to get fast enough to be able to strike lightening bolts out of the air.

It's all been quite cinematic and spiffy.

As for his hands... most of the black there is extensions of the gloves, but not all. Originally he just wore the gloves for the looks since he's got horrible scarring up each arm to the elbow (he doesn't even have finger nails in Homid form), but he since got some nice Body Armour from a Glass Walker Kin... and, yes, he's Dedicated all his armour himself.

And, no, I'm right handed. All that smearing came from a month's worth of the notebook moving around over the image. If I'd scanned it just after I drew it, like I meant to, it'd look a whole lot better than it does right now. It's one of the reasons I rarely draw in pencil if I draw on paper.

See you in the Future,
—Huntermun

Thomas himself started LARP with three Physical Traits. He's since learned fighting from two Striders (one who's trained under a Kalindo Master), and two Fianna brothers. So, basically, he's gone from having no regular physical ability to being very tone, and fast. He's actually trained in Umbral / Dream Time with his Totem (Grandfather Thunder) and managed to get fast enough to be able to strike lightening bolts out of the air.

It's all been quite cinematic and spiffy.

As for his hands... most of the black there is extensions of the gloves, but not all. Originally he just wore the gloves for the looks since he's got horrible scarring up each arm to the elbow (he doesn't even have finger nails in Homid form), but he since got some nice Body Armour from a Glass Walker Kin... and, yes, he's Dedicated all his armour himself.

And, no, I'm right handed. All that smearing came from a month's worth of the notebook moving around over the image. If I'd scanned it just after I drew it, like I meant to, it'd look a whole lot better than it does right now. It's one of the reasons I rarely draw in pencil if I draw on paper.

See you in the Future,
—Huntermun

Ahh cool, it's so rare to see White Wolf fans running around here. And most of them prefer the 'sexy vampires' to garou. The characters I draw alot, Etch and William (aky Wyrm) are originally of Werewolf lore.

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Something Cannot be Feared More than Fear Itself...Especially Spider Demon Gods...

Hey, Mun, that looks awesome! I didn't know that Thomas had black fur. I love the camo look on him. ^w^

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~VelvetMaiden~

Definately a White Wolf fan, yeah... mostly Werewolf: The Apocalypse... ...And Vampire is Vampire... it can be fun, but not for me... I can't really think like that... way to much politics and backstabbing.

Nice, Shadow Lord black fur... Pure Breed 5... and the Camo is "Storm Camo" as I call it... kind of the night sky color with thunderclouds in it.

Vampire is something you need to devote a LARGE chunk of your life too, and only like 1/3 of the clans are worth playing on a short term basis. Brujah, Gangrel and a few blood lines and thats about it really. Werewolf makes the perfect one nighter if that's all you want to do.

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Something Cannot be Feared More than Fear Itself...Especially Spider Demon Gods...

Dunno... I've been playing 2 to 5 times a month for the last six years or so, so I think it's good for more than one night of gaming, heh. n\_/n